Hello! I want to write an email to my shodo teacher. It doesn

’t have to be perfect, but can you understand what I’m asking her?

私の仮名の練習を見てください。
仮名の書道の辞書を参照しますが、ルールがわかりません。だから思いつくまましました。
どれほど下手か教えてもらえますか。
見て恥ずかしいですか。😅
多分、*字面に見えると思いますよ。
もっと学ぶまでやめるべきか。
**ありがとうございます！

Would you please look at my kana practice?
I used the kana shodo dictionary, but I don’t know the rules. So I just made it up.
Can you please tell me if it’s really bad or if it’s embarrassing to look at? 😅
I think it looks too *literal, maybe.
Should I just stop trying until I learn more?
**Thank you!

*is 字面 the right word here? Too “literal,” too obvious? Often kana shodo is harder to read because of artistic writing style...mine might be too plain.

** How should I say “thank you” when asking for a favor?