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note will be in the comments. Please correct me to be as natural as possible ☺️☺️

지난주에 일하면서 올림픽을 보고 있었어요!
재가 가장 좋아하는 운동은 배드민턴이지만 재일 흥미로웠던 스포츠는 사이클 트랙과 수영이었어요.
그 두 스포츠에서 영국이 메달을 많이 땄기 때문인 것 같아요.
하지만 어제 인도가 금메달을 땄기 때문에 최고의 이벤트는 창던지기였어요.
벌써 올림픽이 끝나서 조금 아쉽네요.
이번 주에 휴식이 있는데 계획 중 하나가 취소되었어요.
왜냐하면 친구가 코로나 바이러스에 대한 테스트에서 양성반응을 보였어요.
여동생이 이번 주에 시험 결과가 나와서 저는 휴가를 냈어요.
그래서 가족들과 계획을 많이 만들었어요.
동생이 빙수를 좋아해서 우리는 어제 한국 음식을 먹으러 갔어요.

I spent the whole of last week watching the Olympics whilst I was working.
Although my favourite sport, both to play and watch, is badminton, I found that my two favourite Olympic categories to watch were cycling and swimming. Though, that must have been because GBR(Great Britain) won a lot of medals in those events.
However, I have to say that my ultimate favourite was the javelin yesterday as India won. It’s India’s first athletic gold since 1900!
I’m a little sad that the Olympics are already over.
I’ve got annual leave this week, but one of my plans have been cancelled as my friend tested positive for Covid-19.
The main reason I took time off was that my sister is getting exam results this week. So I made lots of plans with my family to keep her distracted and reduce the stress. She loves Bingsu, so we went to eat Korean food yesterday.