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Paul

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2021.08.19 15:15

Tonight I could see an interesting moon.
So I wrote a poem. It

's called:

🌔✨The Moon dance ✨🌔

The Moon shone brightly in the sky. A beacon beckoning out for help.

Stranded. It had nowhere to go! Perhaps It was stuck? Stuck amongst what appeared to be an almighty armada of massive warships. Imposing and threatenly. A chaotic traffic jam of metallic clouds.

Feeling overwhelmed by the clanging, scraping metal against metal. The moon gracefully melts itself away, now hidden inside itself. Dormant, still and defeated.

Then suddenly! Bursting forth, the moon makes its bold and last stand! Dancing boldly amongst the silvery clouds. It takes lead, conducting chaos back to order.

There is harmony in the sky once again.

Peace amongst the stars.
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  • SHRÚTÍ 2021.08.19 16:33

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    It Beautiful.
  • Poさん 포상 2021.08.19 17:35

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      😟😧😯😲😌 ☁️☁️☁️☁️🌖☁️☁️☁️☁️
  • Chiara 2021.08.19 18:26

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    Love your moon!!!
  • Lydia 2021.08.19 22:04

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    The Moon shone brightly in the sky — A beacon in the dark. The halo of the radiant light, The giant silver spark. The cruel wind entrapped the Moon With mighty heavy clouds. They gathered like a huge platoon — The horde of ghostly shrouds. The Moon was trying to elude And to unblock her way, But lost its hope To escape and fell into dismay. But, look, it's making one last stand To take the lead and win! It bursted forth and dodged the clouds In an impetuous spin! And then, again, it ruled the sky With dignity and grace, Conducting chaos back to order Up in the peaceful space.
  • Paul 2021.08.19 22:16

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    @Lydia wow!!!!! I like your words so much! 🥰🥰🥰🥰 I'm not really a writer but your words are more succinct and poetic. I think, better than mine 😅😅 thank you so much!!!
  • Paul 2021.08.19 22:18

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    @Chiara thank you my friend. 🌔☺️🥰 It was so beautiful last night. I wish you could have seen it on display too. So beautiful 🥰
  • Lydia 2021.08.19 22:19

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    @Paul Thank you! I hope I didn't make any mistakes in it...
  • Chiara 2021.08.19 22:23

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    @Paul full moon soon✨✨
  • Paul 2021.08.19 22:33

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    @Lydia no not that I could see! I really loved your lines The horde of ghostly shrouds. With dignity and grace. An impetuous spin! Seriously Wow!!!!😳 It captured what I was trying to say! You wrote a fantastic composition! I really appreciate the way you made a different spin on it! At first I was reluctant to post this, because I thought, is this going to be difficult for people to understand. All this confusing imagery? But, I'm really glad I did now. Thanks so much! 🙏☺️✨🌔
  • Lydia 2021.08.19 22:35

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    @Paul Yay! I'm glad that nothing "jumps at you" in terms of English grammar and such. 😂 No, it's pretty clear what you meant even for a foreigner. Thanks for sharing!
  • kurumi くるみー 2021.08.19 22:58

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    おはよう!Paul😄 Reading your poem reminded me of Haruki Murakami's novel.☺🌸
  • Paul 2021.08.19 23:46

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    @Lydia your welcome! ☺️☺️🙏
  • Paul 2021.08.20 00:31

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    @kurumi くるみー good morningくるみさん!oh really? I'm unfamiliar with this author 🤔🤔 Sounds good! So many wonderful poems, 俳句 from Japan 😍😍😍👌
  • Paul 2021.08.22 03:08

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    @SHiHO ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🎶🎶🎶✨✨🎶🎶🎶✨✨✨✨✨✨🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶✨✨✨✨✨✨🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶✨✨✨✨✨✨🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🎶🎶🎶✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
  • Paul 2021.08.22 03:08

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    @SHiHO thank you my friend!🎶✨🎶✨🎶💞✨🎶✨🎶✨🎶
  • SHiHO 2021.08.22 21:05

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    @Paul I can see a big heart😍👍🏻❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💖ありがとう🥰
  • Paul 2021.08.22 21:15

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    @SHiHO yes! It's Shio's big musical heart! 💖 The one that brings joy and energy to everyone! 🤸🤸🤸❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💖

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