久しぶりに英語書いとくね、これちゃんと読んで欲しい:

I see this all the time and it bothers

me. I'm by no means an English professor but as a native I know what sounds natural. When I'm bored I'll go through moments on here and see this:

"Today I went to the park. I really like the park because the park is fun. I want to go to the park again soon. "

It's not natural and unnecessary to repeat your subject this many times. Think about how you can say what you want in the most simplist way. In this case:

"Today I went to the park. I like going there because it's fun. I want to go again soon."

日本語で書いたら→「今日公園に行きました。私は公園が好きです。公園は楽しいから私はまた公園に行きたい」

こんだけ「公園」要る？全然自然じゃないと思うけどなぁ。公園の話してるってわかってるから何回言わなくて良い…ですよ。