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Katherine

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2019.08.19 12:39

"가자, 가고 싶은 곳이면 어디든 가자.
온 세상이 눈앞에 있다.
우리만의 것으로 만들자.
오늘은 항상 있

으니까 어제는 그냥 놔둬.”

Practicing my writing. Please correct me 🙏🏻

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Lazlo 2019.08.19 12:41

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👍👍
김지혜 2019.08.19 12:42

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I cant correct your post, cuz you wrote well enough:) and very hopeful😊👍🏻good luck on your way 🍀🍀
Katherine 2019.08.19 12:43

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@Lazlo @김지혜 Thank you both! Maybe I am getting better after all 🤗🤗
Gung_Lim 2019.08.19 12:43

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Perfect👍👍👍
Katherine 2019.08.19 12:48

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@Gung_Lim Thank you! It’s a relief 😃
Kawon 2019.08.19 12:55

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No need to correct..!!! Always your writing is !
Lucy 2019.08.19 12:56

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Wow you are really good at poetic writing👍 Your sentences are almost perfect, but maybe you can correct "있으니까" to "오니까" if you wanna say in more natural way :)
Katherine 2019.08.19 12:57

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@Kawon You’re always so good to me, sweet friend! 😚
Katherine 2019.08.19 12:57

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@Lucy Thank you so much! I definitely want to learn the natural way 😊
Gene 2019.08.19 13:03

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👍👍👍
Katherine 2019.08.19 13:13

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@Gene 😁
김용환 2019.08.19 13:23

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Impressive!
tapit 2019.08.19 13:36

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Nothing to correct. 👍
Katherine 2019.08.19 13:51

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@김용환 @tapit Thank you! 😊
사과꽃 2019.08.19 14:40

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맘에 쏙 드는 글이에요!! 😍
Katherine 2019.08.19 15:19

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@사과꽃 고맙습니다! 당신은 최고예요! 😚
luke 2019.08.19 20:35

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Your writing is great when it comes to grammar and contents (What a great poem!)
Katherine 2019.08.19 20:52

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@luke Thank you for your help and encouragement 😄

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